Hi Canshooter
I'm a Regional GNAS Coach over here in the UK, wish I had the money to come to Canada
Form:
The most obvious thing to me is the 'dead release' scenario you have going on there. It looks like your coming to a full stop once arriving at your facial reference point preventing you from initiating proper back tension.
Once your in the vicinity of your facial reference point you need to maintain the pull, your draw hand stands a better chance of coming behind you head after loose and to conclusion.
Your drawing arm is very high (Korean Style) and in that position, make's it near impossible to activate the correct back muscles to come truly into line on the powerstroke of the shot.
That said, many good trad shooters shoot well with a 'dead release' so I guess it truly comes down to what suites you and what your own personal goal is in what your are trying to achive in your form format!
Just my opinion, hope it helps!
All the best mate.