You are just about perfect!!!
As Arne mentioned you may want to change your grip on the bow a little. In addition to what Arne said,a 45 degree or more angle as viewing the left hand portion of the grip (4 nuckles) is usually helpful as well as pointing the thumb at the target which I really can not see(a wrist adjustment may or may not be needed).
The next portion is hard to internet coach because I do not know your current flexibility levels. But in order to get fully into the "Barrel of the Gun", slightly more rotation is needed on the draw side shoulder as seen in the picture.
I also can not see the hook position on the string, but you maybe torquing string (based upon the cant of the bow and the back of hand).
You are looking exceptionally good though IMO!