2-4-Hooking, I see 2 things:
1. you got 3 inches of dead-wood hanging off the shelf!
2. your shoulder is up too high. Don't do that. No pushing the bow arm/shoulder toward the target.
Think this one through,
Let the shoulders rest naturally, let your bow arm hang naturally, now just swing the bow up and draw it back, don't "make" your body do anything, just let the bow arm come up, keep the shoulder where it is, don't push towards the target, just pick that bow arm up and keep it steady. Steady, not pushing out towards the target. Be prepared to chop those arrow down a bit for proper length.