Main things I see: you look pretty good drawing the bow; might want to avoid the "bring it up, bring it down as you draw" thing. Anchor looks good, but you bring your face down to the anchor and then collapse down even more as you shoot. In other words, your head and anchor move slightly forward, and the release is losing tension. I think your draw length would be quite a bit longer if you drew straight to anchor without moving your head down, and if you continued to pull with your back through the shot instead of slightly collapsing. Basic rule is: you never stop pulling, ever. Your anchor may not move back very much, or even appear to move back at all, like you would think, but good shooters are always pulling with the back. The rate of pull might slow down as you hit anchor, but it's the pull that triggers the shot. Once it stops, you will inevitably begin to collapse, which leads to rough releases and inconsistent arrow velocity. That's really the only negative that I could see, all else looks good. Paul.