Brandon,
I'm no expert, but sure can pick up on someone else doing the same things that I do. I agree with what Cecil said. Work up close, and concentrate on NOT allowing your release hand to loose contact with the side of your face. That will help your follow through.
I was told by someone that shoots a LOT better than I do "When you release the arrow with your fingers, just allow them to point towards your target". That, helped me more than anything else ever has with my "plucking".
You are really not that far off.....with what you are doing. When you change something, DO NOT change more than one thing until whatever it was becomes "second nature"....it should happen without any conscious thought on your part.
Also, when I address the target, I do so by pointing my bow shoulder directly at the target.
The essential form, isn't as much different from shooting a compound, as some would like to believe it is.
Hang in there.......you'll get there.
Winterhawk1960