Yelvi,
Not bad at all! Your draw is good, but at release, you have stopped your back tension. If the BT is still going, your string side shoulder will "jump" more to the rear -- perpendicular to the arrow line. Yours does not move after reaching anchor or during release.
Another tip I'd suggest is to get your string hand thumb DOWN. The thumb should sort of "hang" down in the area of the palm of the hand and at full draw should lay UNDER the jaw bone. By keeping it up like you are, that is placing a lot of tension into your hand and forearm plus the thumb actually levers your hand out from the face.
Arne
PS, where in AK are you? I lived in North Plow for 20 years.