That's looking pretty good, the back lighting still makes it hard to see the string hand at anchor. But, overall pretty good. I can still see the thumb prominently above your string hand as you start the draw, the line from the forearm to the string fingers should be smooth and not have the "thumb bump" I see here.
BUT!! that said, it really depends on where the thumb is at anchor. Ideally the thumb is under your jaw bone but I just can't see that in the video.
Now for the IMPORTANT question. How is your shooting and what if anything do you want to fix?
Arne