Author Topic: another proud father moment... (Read 544 times)

jacobsladder · « **on:** June 04, 2008, 08:14:00 PM »

I constantly find myself butting heads with my 13 year old son. "quit playing video games and get outside" "clean your room" etc, etc....

school is coming to an end and he brought home his book of poems... he never stops amazing me and i just wanted to share these three

Poems by Jake trickshot

jacobsladder · « **Reply #1 on:** June 04, 2008, 08:16:00 PM »

"PATIENCE"

Hunting
Sitting statue like
Stalking,Sneaking, Tracking
A hunter in the brush
I wait

jacobsladder · « **Reply #2 on:** June 04, 2008, 08:17:00 PM »

THE WOODS

The woods, filled with many creatures
Many creatures sneaking thru the brush
The brush is whispering with only the sound of the wind,
The wind carries the whispers of the creatures in the woods.

sticshooter · « **Reply #3 on:** June 04, 2008, 08:19:00 PM »

You are truely Blessed.<><

jacobsladder · « **Reply #4 on:** June 04, 2008, 08:19:00 PM »

Sunny Midnight

Dark and quiet
Trees sleeping
A crunch in the bush
The stillness of midnight

The rising sun
Birds chirping
A snake squeezes his treat
A bear catches his morning salmon

Tyler2045 · « **Reply #5 on:** June 04, 2008, 08:55:00 PM »

These are really Good, You should be very Proud of you son. Congrats. You have a special young man on yours hands. He is my baby sisters age. They grow up fast dont they.

adkmountainken · « **Reply #6 on:** June 04, 2008, 09:15:00 PM »

awesome, i love it!!! you should be proud!

Robert Warnock · « **Reply #7 on:** June 04, 2008, 09:23:00 PM »

He is a very talented writer, encourage him to keep it up.

jacobsladder · « **Reply #8 on:** June 04, 2008, 09:30:00 PM »

thanks for the compliments!!

John3 · « **Reply #9 on:** June 04, 2008, 09:39:00 PM »

Love it.. thanks for sharing.

JDS III

Tim Fishell · « **Reply #10 on:** June 04, 2008, 10:37:00 PM »

Steve I am sure it is trying at times but you got a great kid there!! I would share camp or a course with Jake any day of the week!!

Harmless · « **Reply #11 on:** June 05, 2008, 10:02:00 AM »

Steve, I know what you meen about butting heads with teenagers, but it's stuff like this that show's your doing a fine job of raising your son. Even thought you wouldnt think it, they are listening to you. Puts a smile on your face and makes you proud dosn't it ! Good job !

La. bowhunter · « **Reply #12 on:** June 05, 2008, 10:17:00 AM »

I have 2 teenagers of my own and I know what you mean about butting heads but then they turn around and do something that just melts your heart and all the headbutting is forgotten.

TexMex · « **Reply #13 on:** June 05, 2008, 10:30:00 AM »

JAG · « **Reply #14 on:** June 05, 2008, 09:41:00 PM »

Those are wonderful!
I butted heads with mine, all the way until he joine the Army. He's a good kid, rather man, just made some wrong decisions. But now I can't begin to tell you what a Man he's become. And how proud I am of him. Deploying in the fall. We'll get to see him late summer.
Enjoy the head knockin' while you can. Always cherish thier youth and their lives!
May the Great Spirit keep this young man on the right path, and keep his family close, healthy, and safe.
JAG/Johnny

kennym · « **Reply #15 on:** June 05, 2008, 10:24:00 PM »

jacobsladder · « **Reply #16 on:** June 05, 2008, 10:42:00 PM »

thanks to all !

Larry Surtees · « **Reply #17 on:** June 05, 2008, 11:20:00 PM »

Thanks for sharing -- you should be proud!

Drew · « **Reply #18 on:** June 06, 2008, 08:49:00 AM »

Nice writing Jake!

frassettor · « **Reply #19 on:** June 06, 2008, 09:26:00 AM »

Fantastic!! One heck of a boy you have there


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